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Surrounded by these tow'ring walls
The Master of the Circus calls
And beckons me to put on a show
Of emotions that I'll never know
Laughing colors, glittering lights
Combine and align to form stage fright
Take the high dive towards the ground
Grab the trapeze and don't look down
I sprinted 'cross the tightest rope
And came close to losing all my hope
But somewhere in the midst of it all
I stumbled and you caught my fall
Sad eyes hide behind painted oppression
An exaggeration of a forgotten expression
But perfection lives beneath this masquerade
A paragon that has been beat and betrayed
Lead me through this labyrinth of doors
Memorable passages, yet unexplored
You wanted fun, and I a friend
To break through the trap and find an end
Dancing carelessly through the halls
Knock on doors and 'gainst the walls
Lead me everywhere throughout this maze
A single solution, but so many ways
There we go, I fell again
This time I need more than a friend
Shut the doors then lock them tight
Perhaps we can rest here tonight
We've tangled ourselves into a nice little knot
But if we quiet down, then we shouldn't get caught
Lost in the darkness, our fingers entwined
The hope in those eyes lights up my mind
There's just one thing that I must ask
Take it off, take off your mask
©2005-2009 ~thezimchick
:iconthezimchick:

Author's Comments

this is inspired by some sort of weird-o dream i had last night. i can't remember much except for running into this random clown and then running through a bunch of hallways and whatnot. then we locked ourselves into another room cause people were chasing after us... i don't know... i know it sounds kind of weird... it being a clown and all... but this was a pretty fine lookin' clown. :giggle: the mask was actually quite entricate too. i remember it looking white with painted stars on it or something. i'm sure i've pulled that image from reality though. anyway... yeah... dream-inspired, so it's bound to seem trippy. ^^; hope you like it :D

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:iconaviance:
wow!this is ubberly utterly fantaboulously amazing! you so deserve a daily deviation or somin for this.hmm.shall try put link in my journal for ya.

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I'll wait until ive conquered this dreadfull planet...
:iconthezimchick:
:O_o: goddamn :D didn't quite expect that reaction. although it'd be nice if uhm.. *cough* daily deviation thing.. *cough*cough* anyway, thankyou very much :D i'm quite flattered! :hug:

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//thezimchick

{the truth is out there}
{and so are sheep!}

:alien:
:iconqueen-ofthe-damned:
*claps* worthy of a fave :D very very good

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:stupid: All this time you were pretending
So much for my happy ending
:iconthezimchick:
woot! :hug: thankyou :D

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//thezimchick

{the truth is out there}
{and so are sheep!}

:alien:
:icongoodnightnovembereve:
perfect.

"Sad eyes hide behind painted oppression
An exaggeraton of a forgotten expression"

*exaggeration

i :heart: this

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:yawnstretch:

Won't you come out and play with me?
Pull me under the sheets.
I am your sammy.

:spotlight-left: ~XxTwilights-AngelxX :heart: ~ GustaveDelior :spotlight-right:
:blowkiss: ~horns-and-halos :blowkiss:

:heart:
:iconthezimchick:
yay! thankyou :hug: thanks for pointin' out the spelling. i don't have word reinstalled yet.. so i'm depending on intellect (what good that does me..) always appreciated! thankyou for the fave as well :D

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//thezimchick

{the truth is out there}
{and so are sheep!}

:alien:
:iconpurpleblobofgoo:
Clowns disturb me-- clowns in this poem and clowns in the literal sense.

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<3 Kristen
:iconvoodaddy:
clowns are pretty.

but your poem was fucked up..... SO COOL!!!!!!!!

DOOM DOOM DOOM!!!!!!

hahahaha is the clown full of mission goo????

:glomp:

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Live fast.

Die young.

Leave a good looking corpse.

(at least thats the plan)
:iconthezimchick:
lol.. fucked up? haha. i guess in some weird and trippy sense it was. lol, thankyou :hug:
(and i dunno.. he didn't seem to have an invader persona.. but he might've been on a secret mission. who knows.. it was a figment of my imagination.. and that would explain a lot...)

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//thezimchick

{the truth is out there}
{and so are sheep!}

:alien:

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